Wednesday, October 23, 2013

The Thrill of the Chase

It is time to start the research essay. I fear that students may approach this unit with dread. It is a long essay and, here at the beginning, it looks like a long road. But I envy students just getting started on research. It's a world full of possibilities and interesting new ideas and arguments. I'm always most excited by the the research phase--it is only second in excitement and satisfaction to finally being finished!

Research is exciting because every avenue is open. You should approach your research with an open mind--the interesting possibilities will be missed if you simply go into your research hoping to find support for a pre-existing idea or argument. In fact, this approach--using research to back up an argument--is exactly the opposite of academic inquiry. In academic inquiry, in general--and academic essays, in particular--arguments and theories should develop from a close examination of the evidence. If you don't approach your research with an open mind, willing to see ALL of the different existing perspectives on a topic, you'll be shortchanging yourself, and--more importantly--misleading your reader. While misleading your reader may not seem like as big an issue as actual plagiarism, the end result is similar. Plagiarism makes it seem that someone else's ideas are yours. Ignoring important lines of thought in your sources makes it seem someone else's (or many people's) ideas don't exist. In both cases, the end result is a distorted picture of the actually existing evidence. As a writer, your job is to try to provide the clearest picture you can of your topic.

This doesn't mean, of course, that you have to agree with every source your use. In fact, some of the best arguments--and thus the best productions of new knowledge--come from strong disagreements. But such a disagreement MUST start from a strong understanding of the source as well. To dismiss a source, or a line of argument several sources take up, is to indicate a failure of understanding on the writer's part.

But I've gotten ahead of myself and into the more difficult territory of evaluating arguments and figuring out your own position amongst them. Here, at the beginning, dig in and try to enjoy the ride for a while.

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Defective Understandings

I recently came across this bit of wisdom from I.A. Richards: "We are with difficulty persuaded that we have much to learn about language, or that our understanding of it is defective. And this illusion re-forms whenever is is shattered, though any efficient educational procedure ought to have no trouble shattering as often as is needed. The first condition for improvement in the adult's use of language must be to disturb this ludicrous piece of self-deception" (335, Practical Criticism, 1929).

Richards, although discussing poetry, hits on a key problem that teachers of writing confront. Our students usually have been speaking, or at least hearing, English their entire lives. Having learned the basics of reading and writing at 4 or 5, they come to college with experience reading and writing at a sophisticated level--what is there left to learn? No one likes to be told that his or her understanding is is defective--hence the seemingly protective reformation of the illusion. I wonder how often that illusion re-forms over the course of a semester of first-year composition? Is the underlying rationale behind grading and commenting to continue to shatter students' illusions and to break through the self-deception of believing that it is easy to understand texts?

Perhaps, but I am also thinking about the advice given to readers in some eighteenth-century essays and conduct books. We've been reading commentators like John Gregory and Hester Mulso Chapone who were worried about what their audiences--assumed to be young women--were reading and how their reading might affect their characters. The fears they express about novels and sentimental fiction suggest a defective understanding not so far from Richard's. We also read Samuel Johnson's famous Rambler #4, known as "The New Realistic Novel." Johnson certainly believes that reader's understandings are defective! He doesn't even trust them to understand mixed characters.

These eighteenth-century writers have specific concerns--that young readers will be misled by fiction and fall into corrupt or vicious habits. Richards, writing at a time when literature, including novels, was more acknowledge to be edifying than corrupting, wanted educated people to be better interpreters of language, although we can easily see the anachronism of his assumption that many people are interested in discussing literature, much less poetry, at all. My purpose in pointing out certain defective understandings is usually situated in the context of academic inquiry. Students in college must be able to rigorously examine and explain the sources they use as evidence to develop their arguments. But it seems interesting--and maybe not entirely productive?--that the first step in all of these processes must be so aggressive--shattering illusions and pointing out ludicrous self-deceptions.